First go at modeling

So above is my first go at moddeling the main charecter, not really happy with how it turned out so I'm going to be starting again from scratch, I don't think the turn around I did was not really clear enough.
The turn around I used is below.

Run Man

So basically what I'm working on at the moment is to do a short movie that looks like game play, in an attempt to show to some programmers to get them convinced to work with me and make a short game. Above is the main character design. I'm currently working on modeling him in 3D, however I've never had much experience with 3D modeling so it's kind of a learning experience for me.